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CCCP Chapter One: A Red Star Over Equestria

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[i]A Red Star Over Equestria[/i][/center]

A knock rang from the door as an old mare sat by the fireplace on a rocking chair in a small room, which so happened to be the entire house. Some cracked windows were boarded up and tatters remained of the curtain. A bed barely big enough for one lay in a corner of the room. She strainfully got up from her rocking chair with an obvious lump in her belly to open the door. The wind blew a hard, cold wall of frigid air into the house as a near-frozen stallion in a military uniform wielding a rifle entered the house, gingerly taking off his shoes that by now had no soles

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Friendship Is... Worth Fighting Forby =10art1

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I made this comic mostly as a gift to my friend

because I have been a jerk to him lately and I want to show him that his friendship isn't worthless to me. It is also for everyone else as a cautionary lesson, even though the comic's lesson seems obvious, you might not know you are hurting someone until it's too late. After I learned this lesson the hard way, I decided it was worthy of sending a letter to Princess Celestia.

I started this comic towards the end of December last year. I was going to finish it earlier but then I had a commission I had to attend to. Also I used simple backgrounds to emphasize Turbo's importance (he is our background guy).

The picture in the frame is a snapshot from the show (c) 2011 Hasbro

Critique by ~HailRarity Jan 31, 2013, 2:30:17 PM

IS DONUT TIME!
Technique: 5th panel is best panel! All I'd change is that I can't tell who is writing the friendship report and it might've been an idea to make it clearer. And more Rarity.
Originality: I have seen many an Appledash arguing comic in my time but you resolved it nicely and with a little more improvement you may learn to include Rarity.
Impact: As I said, this isn't my first time viewing the stubbornness of Applejack and Rainbow Dash but this is a new layout. Suggestions for improvement can be summed up in four words: MOAR RARITY LIKE YEAH.
Vision: It's like you have emotions and stuff! It's a new look for you. Que bueno. Have 4.5 donuts.
HailRarity, out.

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Critique by ~berryrue Jan 30, 2013, 11:48:35 AM

Fall weather season, this was a very good lesson from the show. Too many friends have walked out on each other due to pride and selfishness. Artistically I like the soft shading but you still made the ponies more then recognizable from the show. I like how you made Rainbow Dash the usual proud pony, fix the relationship. It's so true that at one minute you hate your friend and the next you feel that your not worthy of them. I also like how instead of making a comic, you made one from your heart relating to a circumstance in you own life. In all this is a cute and influential comic.