I made this comic mostly as a gift to my friend
because I have been a jerk to him lately and I want to show him that his friendship isn't worthless to me. It is also for everyone else as a cautionary lesson, even though the comic's lesson seems obvious, you might not know you are hurting someone until it's too late. After I learned this lesson the hard way, I decided it was worthy of sending a letter to Princess Celestia.
I started this comic towards the end of December last year. I was going to finish it earlier but then I had a commission I had to attend to. Also I used simple backgrounds to emphasize Turbo's importance (he is our background guy).
The picture in the frame is a snapshot from the show (c) 2011 Hasbro
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Technique: 5th panel is best panel! All I'd change is that I can't tell who is writing the friendship report and it might've been an idea to make it clearer. And more Rarity.
Originality: I have seen many an Appledash arguing comic in my time but you resolved it nicely and with a little more improvement you may learn to include Rarity.
Impact: As I said, this isn't my first time viewing the stubbornness of Applejack and Rainbow Dash but this is a new layout. Suggestions for improvement can be summed up in four words: MOAR RARITY LIKE YEAH.
Vision: It's like you have emotions and stuff! It's a new look for you. Que bueno. Have 4.5 donuts.
HailRarity, out.
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