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That's What She Said by 10art1 That's What She Said by 10art1
Ugh, I have been working on this comic entirely too long. Anyway, it is finally done and I can move on to something else, something less time consuming. Like Flash, for example. I be finally obtaining me adobe flash cs6, yarr ;)

Big thanks to :icondori-to: and MLPDrawingSchool for helping me out on this comic! Don't forget every little bit helps, so favorite and comment, and if you really like it, please drop me a watch! There's more like this coming!
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:iconturbosolid:
Progress, progress, progress
Let's start with the vision. It's pretty clear here that you knew the comic you were going to make before you even started. From the beginning, one get's the feeling that silliness is soon to ensue. So great job on that.
Next, originality. I don't think I've ever read a comic with more than one punchline. As far as I can tell, you included three, not including the cool book easter egg.
Technique. You have a definite style developing. It's similar to canon but with your own little twist. Don't be afraid to go crazy with it. I absolutely love some of Dashy's facial expressions :3 here. And Molestia. Sweet mother of Equestria O_O
Nice work.
Finally, there's the impact. I love it. The people love it. Equestria Daily loves it.
Honestly, I don't know what more I can say. This is a well done comic that doesn't seem rushed at all. You took your time, and it really shows. Great job, 10art1.
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Sooo, time for a proper request from your art teacher.

Starting with vision. Remember how I said I didn't have anything to do with the jokes in this comic? Well, I take it back. But all glory to you! After reading this a 100 times throughout the fabrication process, it may have lost some of its funnyness, but the majority of the people seem to enjoy it, so good job!

Originality: old joke, known characters but you managed to pull it all together. Keeping in mind that I am a culprit to this I give it one star less.

Technique: wow, you have come a long way. From your first Dashie sketch to this... I take my tacohat off to that. And as I said, you don't have to copy other people when you take the time to discover your own style. And just look at that telescope!

Impact: Last panel punch line and a uranus joke, enough said. What gets me most is the cute Dashie faces throughout the whole thing, wich adds to the impact quite a lot and keeps your attention in the form of a healthy dose of d'aaaw.
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AnimeFanFlutters Feb 21, 2014  Student Artist
pfffffft Uranus....
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10art1 Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah yes, back when penis jokes were funny...
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AnimeFanFlutters Feb 23, 2014  Student Artist
Yes,Yes. We can all remember that~
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10art1 Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
8==mmD~~~
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Twily469 Jan 26, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Hahahahaha nice ending¡¡ Molestia likes this
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10art1 Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I miss Molly :(
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MomokaSan2013 Dec 17, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Trololololololoololololololololl
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:iconbrony-shiningarmor:
danm the only thing this one needs is a sound where molestia sais `got ya`
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:iconweeya1:
That was my reaction to the "That's what she said."
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