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That's What She Said by 10art1 That's What She Said by 10art1
Ugh, I have been working on this comic entirely too long. Anyway, it is finally done and I can move on to something else, something less time consuming. Like Flash, for example. I be finally obtaining me adobe flash cs6, yarr ;)

Big thanks to :icondori-to: and MLPDrawingSchool for helping me out on this comic! Don't forget every little bit helps, so favorite and comment, and if you really like it, please drop me a watch! There's more like this coming!
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Progress, progress, progress
Let's start with the vision. It's pretty clear here that you knew the comic you were going to make before you even started. From the beginning, one get's the feeling that silliness is soon to ensue. So great job on that.
Next, originality. I don't think I've ever read a comic with more than one punchline. As far as I can tell, you included three, not including the cool book easter egg.
Technique. You have a definite style developing. It's similar to canon but with your own little twist. Don't be afraid to go crazy with it. I absolutely love some of Dashy's facial expressions :3 here. And Molestia. Sweet mother of Equestria O_O
Nice work.
Finally, there's the impact. I love it. The people love it. Equestria Daily loves it.
Honestly, I don't know what more I can say. This is a well done comic that doesn't seem rushed at all. You took your time, and it really shows. Great job, 10art1.
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Sooo, time for a proper request from your art teacher.

Starting with vision. Remember how I said I didn't have anything to do with the jokes in this comic? Well, I take it back. But all glory to you! After reading this a 100 times throughout the fabrication process, it may have lost some of its funnyness, but the majority of the people seem to enjoy it, so good job!

Originality: old joke, known characters but you managed to pull it all together. Keeping in mind that I am a culprit to this I give it one star less.

Technique: wow, you have come a long way. From your first Dashie sketch to this... I take my tacohat off to that. And as I said, you don't have to copy other people when you take the time to discover your own style. And just look at that telescope!

Impact: Last panel punch line and a uranus joke, enough said. What gets me most is the cute Dashie faces throughout the whole thing, wich adds to the impact quite a lot and keeps your attention in the form of a healthy dose of d'aaaw.
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powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OH NO IT'S MOLESTIA.


RUN!
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10art1 Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hehe oh gosh I miss that blog so much
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powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
BRONIES, ATTACK THIS MONSTER! DESTROY MOLESTIA!
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10art1 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconummmplz: I don't think you understand how "love and tolerate" works
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powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Why does Molestia even exist?
I mean she doesn't act like this.
This is just wrong.

I understand 'love and tolerate'.
It's just that when Lauren Faust created Celestia, she didn't want it to go this far.
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10art1 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I bet when Faust created all the ponies she didn't quite think most thing bronies have done would happen. Molestia isn't actually as bad as people make her outt o be, she doesn't really rape ponies, she just gets them into uncomfortably suggestive situations i.ytimg.com/vi/I4-hNwJ9Xxs/max…
I've seen far worse things come from the brony fandom...
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powerpuffgirl111 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, can't agree with that....
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10art1 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
that's fine :P there will always be a difference of opinion. I don't much hide the fact that I look at and create NSFW, so stuff like molestia really seems trivial and tame.
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AnimeFanFlutters Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2014  Student Artist
pfffffft Uranus....
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10art1 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ah yes, back when penis jokes were funny...
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