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and MLPDrawingSchool for helping me out on this comic! Don't forget every little bit helps, so favorite and comment, and if you really like it, please drop me a watch! There's more like this coming!
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Why does everyone always say "I will start with vision"? I mean, duh, you're gonna start with vision, it's the first one in the list! I'mm'a start with originality, to be original.
Originality: Obviously "she" has been saying uncouth things for quite some time now, but the fact that "she" is here depicted as Molestia earns you five donuts*!
Impact: I grinned at this, which by internet standards equates to a standing ovation in live comedy terms. Minus 0.5 donuts for lack of pyrotechnics.
Vision: Impaired. Consider contact lenses. Low-lying fog may lead to considerably reduced visibility.
Technique: I'm not complaining. Wait, yes I am, THERE'S NO RARITY. Think on your sins.
*Donuts = stars
Starting with vision. Remember how I said I didn't have anything to do with the jokes in this comic? Well, I take it back. But all glory to you! After reading this a 100 times throughout the fabrication process, it may have lost some of its funnyness, but the majority of the people seem to enjoy it, so good job!
Originality: old joke, known characters but you managed to pull it all together. Keeping in mind that I am a culprit to this I give it one star less.
Technique: wow, you have come a long way. From your first Dashie sketch to this... I take my tacohat off to that. And as I said, you don't have to copy other people when you take the time to discover your own style. And just look at that telescope!
Impact: Last panel punch line and a uranus joke, enough said. What gets me most is the cute Dashie faces throughout the whole thing, wich adds to the impact quite a lot and keeps your attention in the form of a healthy dose of d'aaaw.
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