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Wonderbolts Officer Dash by Dori-to

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Alright, so since I had no part in this development I can shamelessly write a critique.

To start... *flops over and dies* this is just so awesome! Everything from the shading to the mane to the fucking awesome background rocks! This is the best Christmas present I have ever received ;-;

I like the uniform, it is like Spitfire's uniform but I guess a different color. Still has the same epilets, too. The mane is way different, being flowy and way longer than Rainbow's normal mane, but I can understand that is to compensate for the hat being there. The shading is your usual gaussian and hard, which work wonders. I love the shine on the hat. I tried doing something similar but you just nailed it.

The background in itself is beautiful, you'll have to show me how you made those clouds!

I guess my only criticism would be her anatomical correctness, which from now on I'm going to take more seriously. I think her neck is long and her left eye looks too big and/or too low.


Now if you'll excuse me I'll go die of happiness now, if that's ok with you...
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AJSmack Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
This is what you call a critique?

You've got like one criticism in it. The rest is just a massive amount of praise. This is just terrible. I cannot really put into words how terrible this is without referencing certain sexual acts that I feel would be inappropriate to mention.

Critique is for an artist to learn and get better, not for them to get their ego stroked.
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10art1 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Alright well this critique was indeed praise because Dori-to and I are bros and I have been smacking him on the head over every little detail throughout the whole process, so really I have little to say other than praise.
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AJSmack Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Then might I direct you to this section on that submission called "comments?" It sounds way more up your alley.
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10art1 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Whatever, I do what I want.
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